From 9643299546b522590feaf1e2b3a212370f3d8690 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Paul Schaub <vanitasvitae@fsfe.org>
Date: Fri, 8 Dec 2023 23:11:07 +0100
Subject: [PATCH 1/3] Describe nested one-pass-signatures

---
 book/source/07-signing_data.md | 55 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++-------
 1 file changed, 45 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/book/source/07-signing_data.md b/book/source/07-signing_data.md
index a9d7c6b..a219643 100644
--- a/book/source/07-signing_data.md
+++ b/book/source/07-signing_data.md
@@ -69,13 +69,7 @@ To produce an {term}`inline signature`, the {term}`signer` processes the entiret
 
 For efficient {term}`verification`, an application must understand how to handle the {term}`literal data<Literal Data Packet>` prior to its reading. This requirement is addressed by the {term}`one-pass signature packets<One-pass Signature Packet>` located at the beginning of {term}`inline-signed<Inline Signature>` messages. These {term}`packets<Packet>` include essential information such as the {term}`fingerprint<OpenPGP Fingerprint>` of the {term}`signing key<OpenPGP Component Key>` and the {term}`hash<Hash Digest>` algorithm used for computing the {term}`signature<OpenPGP Signature Packet>`'s {term}`hash digest`. This setup enables the verifier to process the data correctly and efficiently.
 
-```{admonition} TODO
-:class: warning
-
-Is the signer keyid/fingerprint in the OPS important for the verifier to be able to verify the signature efficiently? Or is it (only?) there to be hashed and signed, along with the literal data?
-
-Realization: It's probably useful to know the fingerprints right away, to first go find the public key material, before calculating the hash of a huge file.
-``` 
+Strictly speaking, the hash algorithm would be sufficient to begin the verification process, but having the signers fingerprint/key-id available upfront allows to fetch the signers certificate before processing the entirety of the - potentially large - signed data.
 
 #### Verification
 
@@ -148,8 +142,49 @@ Despite their widespread adoption, {term}`cleartext signatures<Cleartext Signatu
 
 ### Nesting of one-pass signatures
 
-```{admonition} TODO
-:class: warning
+Signing a message using the one-pass mechanism involves prepending a *One-Pass-Signature* (OPS) packet to the message and appending the corresponding signature, sandwiching the signed content.
 
-Write
+An OpenPGP message can contain multiple signatures added that way.
+
+```{note}
+One-Pass-Signatures are nested, meaning the outermost One-Pass-Signature packet corresponds to the outermost signature packet.
+``` 
+
+When a message is signed, the signature is always calculated over the contents of the literal data packet, not the literal data packet itself.
+This means, that if a message, which is compressed using a compressed data packet is wrapped using a one-pass-signature, the signature is still being calculated over the plaintext inside the literal data packet.
+
+There is one exception though.
+```{note}
+Of course there is.
 ```
+
+The OPS packet has a "nested" flag[^nested-flag], which can either be `1` or `0`.
+If this flag is set to `0`, it indicates that further OPSs will follow this packet, which are calculated over the same plaintext data as this OPS is. A value of `1` indicates, that either no further OPS packets will follow (this OPS is the last), or that this OPS is calculated over the the usual plaintext data, but wrapped inside any OPS+Signature combinations that follow this OPS.
+
+[^nested-flag]: See [description of the nested flag](https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-openpgp-crypto-refresh-12.html#section-5.4-3.8.1).
+
+This mechanism enables attested signatures, where the signer signs an already one-pass-signed message including the already contained signature.
+
+As a practical example, consider the following notation:
+* `LIT("Hello World")` represents a literal data packet with the content `Hello World`.
+* `COMP(XYZ)` represents a compressed data packet over some other packet `XYZ`.
+* `OPS₁` represents a one-pass-signature packet with the nested flag set to `1`. Analogous, `OPS₀` has the nested flag set to `0`.
+* `SIG` represents a signature packet.
+
+A normal, one-pass-signed message looks like this:
+`OPS₁ LIT("Hello World") SIG`
+
+Here, the signature is calculated over the plaintext `Hello World`, as is it in a message that has the following form: `OPS₁ COMP(LIT("Hello World")) SIG`.
+
+A message, where multiple one-pass-signatures are calculated over the same plaintext looks the following:
+`OPS₀ OPS₀ OPS₁ LIT("Hello World") SIG SIG SIG`
+
+All three signatures are calculated over the same plaintext `Hello World`.
+
+Now, a message, where the signer attests an already signed message has the following format:
+`OPS₁ OPS₁ LIT("Hello World") SIG SIG`
+
+While the inner signature is calculated over the usual plaintext `Hello World`, the outer signature is instead calculated over `OPS₁ Hello World SIG`.
+
+And if you gaze long enough into an ̸̞̈a̷̬̎b̶̩̍y̵͍̓ṣ̸͝s̸̞̓,̶̢͂ ̵͔̈ṯ̷̎h̸̫̓e̸̥̽ ̸̧̏a̴̼̣̓̓b̶͖̺̈́͘ŷ̷̢͚̽ŝ̷̛̲̠s̴͍̞͐́ ̵̝̫͂̚w̸͎͇͌̇i̵̹̗͗́l̷̼̬̾͑l̷͍̮̿̃ ̵̞̠͍̘͊̃̚͠ḡ̷͓͙̯̹͗̍͘a̶̫͇̜̬̓́̓̽z̵̰̰͈̀̈́̓̊͜e̸̢̦͚̼͛́́͘ b̷͍͚͇̖̤̘͒̏͂̄̿̂͘ͅa̸̧͎̗͈̥̞̗͊̔̐̓́͆̽c̴͇͖̲͉̱̲͈͌̾̈̅̽̆͝k̵̨̧̨͇̦̝̈́͆͐̾͑̅̇͜ ̷͓̱̣̳͇̜́̑̀̑͂̀͛ͅḯ̴̛̥̙̣͈̪͕̅̃̇̽̚ͅn̷̨͓͎̪̫̥̮̐̇̋̈́͛̅͠t̶͍͉̭̝̩̼̟̂̍̓̌̄̚͠o̷̟͚͇̰̥̲̬͊̒̈́̃̐̽͆ ̸͉̰̮̞̱̣̄͌̓̐͌̃̕͜ý̴̨̺̠̘̲̻̃̅̋̾̒̕ͅǫ̷̰̳͕͚̯̭̾̑̎͌͂͝͝ṵ̸̡̼̜̗͖͉̄̍̿͌̽͐̚.̸̣̩̻͍̘̭̱̆́͌́̀͊̚
+

From b7da62aa690424e7896e54a05303e371de817220 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Heiko Schaefer <heiko@schaefer.name>
Date: Sat, 9 Dec 2023 19:23:45 +0100
Subject: [PATCH 2/3] edits for clarity

---
 book/source/07-signing_data.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/book/source/07-signing_data.md b/book/source/07-signing_data.md
index a219643..c95be3b 100644
--- a/book/source/07-signing_data.md
+++ b/book/source/07-signing_data.md
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ To produce an {term}`inline signature`, the {term}`signer` processes the entiret
 
 For efficient {term}`verification`, an application must understand how to handle the {term}`literal data<Literal Data Packet>` prior to its reading. This requirement is addressed by the {term}`one-pass signature packets<One-pass Signature Packet>` located at the beginning of {term}`inline-signed<Inline Signature>` messages. These {term}`packets<Packet>` include essential information such as the {term}`fingerprint<OpenPGP Fingerprint>` of the {term}`signing key<OpenPGP Component Key>` and the {term}`hash<Hash Digest>` algorithm used for computing the {term}`signature<OpenPGP Signature Packet>`'s {term}`hash digest`. This setup enables the verifier to process the data correctly and efficiently.
 
-Strictly speaking, the hash algorithm would be sufficient to begin the verification process, but having the signers fingerprint/key-id available upfront allows to fetch the signers certificate before processing the entirety of the - potentially large - signed data.
+Strictly speaking, knowing just the hash algorithm would be sufficient to begin the verification process. However, having efficient access to the signer's fingerprint or key ID upfront allows OpenPGP software to fetch the signer's certificates before processing the entirety of the - potentially large - signed data, and .
 
 #### Verification
 

From 64c8dffee813e92a7089a7a6418c5eb7043f93e4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Heiko Schaefer <heiko@schaefer.name>
Date: Sun, 10 Dec 2023 13:09:52 +0100
Subject: [PATCH 3/3] dropping the zalgo for now, with mixed feelings and
 paul's blessing

(i hope we'll find the perfect place to revive it, in round 2!)
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 book/source/07-signing_data.md | 3 ---
 1 file changed, 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/book/source/07-signing_data.md b/book/source/07-signing_data.md
index c95be3b..d166794 100644
--- a/book/source/07-signing_data.md
+++ b/book/source/07-signing_data.md
@@ -185,6 +185,3 @@ Now, a message, where the signer attests an already signed message has the follo
 `OPS₁ OPS₁ LIT("Hello World") SIG SIG`
 
 While the inner signature is calculated over the usual plaintext `Hello World`, the outer signature is instead calculated over `OPS₁ Hello World SIG`.
-
-And if you gaze long enough into an ̸̞̈a̷̬̎b̶̩̍y̵͍̓ṣ̸͝s̸̞̓,̶̢͂ ̵͔̈ṯ̷̎h̸̫̓e̸̥̽ ̸̧̏a̴̼̣̓̓b̶͖̺̈́͘ŷ̷̢͚̽ŝ̷̛̲̠s̴͍̞͐́ ̵̝̫͂̚w̸͎͇͌̇i̵̹̗͗́l̷̼̬̾͑l̷͍̮̿̃ ̵̞̠͍̘͊̃̚͠ḡ̷͓͙̯̹͗̍͘a̶̫͇̜̬̓́̓̽z̵̰̰͈̀̈́̓̊͜e̸̢̦͚̼͛́́͘ b̷͍͚͇̖̤̘͒̏͂̄̿̂͘ͅa̸̧͎̗͈̥̞̗͊̔̐̓́͆̽c̴͇͖̲͉̱̲͈͌̾̈̅̽̆͝k̵̨̧̨͇̦̝̈́͆͐̾͑̅̇͜ ̷͓̱̣̳͇̜́̑̀̑͂̀͛ͅḯ̴̛̥̙̣͈̪͕̅̃̇̽̚ͅn̷̨͓͎̪̫̥̮̐̇̋̈́͛̅͠t̶͍͉̭̝̩̼̟̂̍̓̌̄̚͠o̷̟͚͇̰̥̲̬͊̒̈́̃̐̽͆ ̸͉̰̮̞̱̣̄͌̓̐͌̃̕͜ý̴̨̺̠̘̲̻̃̅̋̾̒̕ͅǫ̷̰̳͕͚̯̭̾̑̎͌͂͝͝ṵ̸̡̼̜̗͖͉̄̍̿͌̽͐̚.̸̣̩̻͍̘̭̱̆́͌́̀͊̚
-