Heiko Schaefer
63f6751c4e
Merge branch 'heiko-ch12' into draft
2023-12-02 18:03:38 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
64927af1cb
ch13: armor
2023-12-02 00:29:47 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
566382dfa8
ch13: armor
2023-12-02 00:12:32 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
d401529a15
link anchor
2023-12-01 22:56:30 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
d48f816d5b
ch12: compression draft
2023-12-01 22:21:41 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
710c69ee86
link anchor
2023-12-01 22:21:34 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
61e0846b94
use updated diagrams
2023-11-28 22:32:27 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
2739b01b4b
update diagrams from skvis-draft
2023-11-28 22:27:44 +01:00
heiko
18e12545c6
Merge pull request 'various small ch2 edits' ( #151 ) from heiko-ch2 into draft
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Reviewed-on: https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/151
2023-11-28 20:48:22 +00:00
Heiko Schaefer
9daa036543
don't drop diagram files
2023-11-28 21:25:03 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
7822af768a
correct commit 86d2be1a85
2023-11-28 21:19:01 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
899b9b0907
rewrite commit ed6e82a464
for clarity
2023-11-28 21:15:34 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
7847105383
import new diagrams from skvisual
2023-11-27 21:30:20 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
fa36337ea7
Clarify that RFC 6637 doesn't define use of curve 25519 based mechanisms
2023-11-26 13:32:52 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
86d2be1a85
Expand examples in introduction paragraph, based on feedback in #111
2023-11-26 13:14:10 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
a81ece2f42
Clarify that Fedora uses Sequoia in rpm in version 38 and newer
2023-11-25 23:24:18 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
ed6e82a464
Mention initial v6 work
2023-11-25 23:24:14 +01:00
heiko
a7abea94ee
Merge pull request 'tammi-ch8' ( #145 ) from tammi-ch8 into draft
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Reviewed-on: https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/145
2023-11-25 22:13:57 +00:00
heiko
1a0b26ad91
Merge pull request 'tammi-ch8-heiko' ( #150 ) from tammi-ch8-heiko into tammi-ch8
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Reviewed-on: https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/150
2023-11-25 22:13:42 +00:00
Heiko Schaefer
3a921f6528
Merge branch 'draft' into tammi-ch8-heiko
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# Conflicts:
# book/source/08-signing_components.md
2023-11-25 23:09:12 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
8431dd8e1d
re-instate section structure
2023-11-25 23:05:13 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
4f179701e3
Merge remote-tracking branch 'origin/liw-ch3-tammi' into draft
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# Conflicts:
# book/source/03-cryptography.md
2023-11-25 23:00:47 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
f1e6da7e74
try again
2023-11-25 22:53:02 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
90f2ad9c4f
further streamline commit 7f68db756c
2023-11-25 22:15:37 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
8ab3d359e6
edit to commit 36399d330b
2023-11-25 22:07:07 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
11542af645
add placeholder "append-only" link target
2023-11-25 20:03:58 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
dc9e9510d0
ci: codespell fixes
2023-11-25 20:01:26 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
3130ebee43
Merge branch 'heiko-ch4' into draft
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# Conflicts:
# book/source/04-certificates.md
2023-11-25 19:40:56 +01:00
heiko
001f8ab343
Merge pull request 'ch4: additional edits by heiko on top of tammi's edits in heiko-ch4
' ( #148 ) from heiko-ch4-edit2 into heiko-ch4
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Reviewed-on: https://codeberg.org/openpgp/notes/pulls/148
2023-11-25 18:35:27 +00:00
Heiko Schaefer
5621dfa79c
avoid using the technical term "key" as a generic word
2023-11-25 19:29:18 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
b121676a0d
i think "demonstrate" gestures partly in the wrong direction.
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much agility is already built in. the point here is not that more agility can be built in on short notice (even though that is also true). but rather that OpenPGP already allows users to make a lot of decisions about which mechanisms to use, right now.
2023-11-25 19:26:55 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
0a2bccb380
generalize: User Attributes are uncommon, but we should include them
2023-11-25 19:20:42 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
ee1e9d5396
simplify/clarify section title
2023-11-25 19:20:00 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
4635d15ece
drop duplication
2023-11-25 18:41:35 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
111f6cca41
attempt at footnote with more detail on fingerprint uniqueness. the exact content might need more tweaking.
2023-11-25 18:39:02 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
a431853832
zoom_certificates doesn't talk about private keys (anymore). de-emphasize the packet-level chapter (it's still very unclear to me how many readers should look at those chapters).
2023-11-25 18:24:36 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
3b0dfd5cd7
move contextualization paragraphs up to the first block
2023-11-25 18:14:45 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
06c40b0275
i'm uncomfortable offering an explanation for this recommendation
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(i don't think security is a concern here. maybe interoperability?)
2023-11-25 17:49:35 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
43b26012de
minor tweak
2023-11-25 17:46:07 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
77a0a69d78
clarify language
2023-11-25 17:43:30 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
993da3ccf4
don't use the generic word "critical" in a context where it has a technical meaning
2023-11-25 17:39:47 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
887c5bf0e6
remove dangling footnote syntax
2023-11-25 17:32:33 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
127f36162c
move example texts into diagram notes
2023-11-25 17:32:33 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
5887bcc880
edit "trust signature" text
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- lean on the word "trust" as little as possible
- some clarifications
2023-11-25 17:32:33 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
8c8cf2ed50
edit commit 02b0785584
on the not-exactly-unique fingerprint
2023-11-25 16:30:54 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
4a2595c5f7
remove comma in commit e0457bac64
2023-11-25 16:24:09 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
f0e5c00803
reorganize and structure content to answer commit 992c878fea
2023-11-25 16:17:31 +01:00
Tammi L. Coles
7cb536008b
edit commit 451b881c03
2023-11-25 16:03:52 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
e49d1e69af
clarify certification text
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And use Bob's real fingerprint.
2023-11-25 15:57:00 +01:00
Heiko Schaefer
4b9c064a8b
it seems confusing to imply that bob will necessarily distribute a third-party certification, this is only true some of the time
2023-11-25 15:43:24 +01:00